Some very good writing here Liam - I really like the one with Snowball! Excellent diversion tactics!!! Some better proofreading needed in places but I think you have a pretty good ear for dialogue.
Some very good writing here Liam - I really like the one with Snowball! Excellent diversion tactics!!! Some better proofreading needed in places but I think you have a pretty good ear for dialogue.
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