Showing posts with label G. Assignment 6 - Screenplays. Show all posts
Showing posts with label G. Assignment 6 - Screenplays. Show all posts

Tuesday, 14 February 2017

The Journey of a Script

Job roles within the commissioning process

Commissioning Editor

A Commissioning Editors job is to identify scripts, books and other media products to publish by deciding whether or not it's worth commissioning by attending book fairs, performing internet research, surveys and maybe going to press conferences. This will help the commissioning editors learn about varied trends and different gaps in the market to find out if the idea proposed to them will be worth publishing and working out if it will be successful and make them a good deal of money. You can look at these people as basically a buyer of a product.

Producer

The Producer is a significant part of the writer's journey as they are the people who turn a writers story idea into an ideally profitable film. Producers will commission a writer to work with the production of their story or buy the rights to the screenplay, novel or whatever it may be. Once the screenplay is sold, the writer only has the rights they agreed on with the buyer. When and if a Producer buys a writer's script they can change the story however they wish, whether it is changing a few characters here and there or completely re-arranging the plot. However, writers get very angry because of this and unfortunately cannot do anything about it as from the moment their script is sold they lose all rights to it. In some occasions if the writer's story gets changed and the writer sees it as a terrible adjustment they take their name off of the screenplay.

Director

A Director is the most important person during the production of a film, controlling all the artistic and dramatic aspects of film. Once a producer purchases the rights to a successful screenplay, the producer will look for a director who will be in charge of interpreting the script and making it into a film with fellow actors and crew. In pre-production process, the Director will normally meet the writer of the screenplay that he's directing to gain insight and further understanding of the characters, themes and narrative. During production the writer can sometimes help and get involved with the filming process but this depends if the director wants any guidance, which is mostly the case.

This whole measure of receiving scripts, meeting with the writer, discussing certain elements and having further support is sometimes eliminated when a Director writes their own screenplays. Some directors do this because they like to see their own creations come to life or to bypass the whole exchanging scripts process with the writer. A great example of a director that wrote, directed and acted in his own screenplay is "Quentin Tarantino" in "Pulp Fiction", a black comedy crime film made in 1994.

Script Editor

Before anything, Script Editors normally work with the screenwriter to give a second opinion/view on it to help improve the strength of the script. This will give the screenwriter lots of help to understand where he might have gone wrong and what he needs to do in order to improve it. After this, Script Editors will work as part of the camera department to ensure that the production has continuous verbal and visual integrity. They must make sure that when different takes and scenes are finally decided on and edited, the production does not contain any eye-catching and distracting continuity issues. Script Editors/Supervisors look closely at every shot and take precise, detailed notes to give the Editors, Directors and anyone else who needs to know an authoritative reference.

Legal and Ethical Aspects of Writing

As a Writer, there are many legal and ethical issues that have to be taken into account when becoming a screenplay writer. This includes bias, censorship, liability, watersheds and copyright.

When Screenwriters write a script they have to take into account whether or not they are being biased in their script. Meaning having favouritism or being one sided on a certain topic, such as; ethnicity, disabilities, race, etc. Screenwriters are allowed give and express their views to viewers in their story about a topic, but offending someone or disrespecting anyone in anyway is extremely unacceptable. Every screenplay must respect all audiences, cultures and beliefs.

Screenwriters will need to be aware of watershed and any sort of censorship when planning/writing their script. Any sort of adult material which is going to be shown on TV must follow strict rules depending on what time the product has to be broadcasted. Ofcom states, "The watershed begins at 9pm and material unsuitable for children should not, in general, be shown before 9pm or after 5.30am.". When the target audience is thought of and you know who you are aiming the script at, research is needed to lookup age rating guidelines on BBFC to make sure all content you produce is appropriate for your target audience.

Copyright is another very important thing, first of all if you attempt to copy someones script you will be accused of plagiarism. Furthermore, if they have copyrighted their screenplay and you attempt to copy it you are liable to get sued by them. However if the issue has been taken to court and they haven't copyrighted their screenplay, they will find it very difficult to prove it is theirs, vice versa. Libel is the creating and distribution of a product which you know will affect someone or a group of people in either a harmful or emotional way. This is why screenwriters usually make characters not based solely on real people, in order to not harm them and create any legal issues.

Commissioning Bodies

A corporation is a large company or group of companies authorized to act as a single establishment. For the film industry there are massive film making and film distribution companies. There are four main commissioning bodies which I will speak about - these include;
  • Corporations
  • Independent production companies
  • Independent directors and producers
  • Competitions


Corporations will commission films and programmes to be created and aired on the TV or wherever it may be, one prime example is the BBC. Everything visual you see on their channels/website would have been written by usually a scriptwriter beforehand. On the BBC's website, they have a specific area for writers that wish to become noticed in the industry which offers tips and advice. Also, if someones material is at a high standard, there is a chance they may arrange a project to become of it, this obviously doesn't come easy.

Independent production companies will usually produce films and television programmes by being approached from corporations such as the BBC, asking to create them from screenplays they have maybe already obtained from someone. A great example of an independent production company is "Tiger Aspect Productions" which has produced some very iconic television series', these include; Ripper St. (BBC One), Benidorm (ITV), CUFFS (BBC One) and Mr Bean: The Animated Series (CITV)

Nowadays it is much easier for directors and producers to create and have an independent film produced without the assistance of a major film studio, due to the huge range of filming equipment that is now affordable on today’s market compared to how it was many years ago. Potentially if an independent producer or director wanted the film to become a bigger film, you would have to find an agent to help them so they could hopefully arrange and set-up meetings with a distributor if the film was potentially a profitable idea. The film "Paranormal Activity" was independently directed and produced by Oren Peli and Jason Blum with a budget of only $15,000, it was later distributed by Paramount Pictures, turning it into the most profitable movie ever made.

A great way to hopefully get your script known and to make your way into the industry is entering competitions. A winning script, as well as near winning scripts will be highly recognized and will help build your confidence to inform you that you have something special to bring to the industry with your skills as a scriptwriter. An amazing film competition is hosted by the UK Film festival called "3 Minute Script Competition", where you have to produce a script of 3 pages long, This is very efficient as it takes much less time than other contests, with the opportunity of gaining just as much recognition. There have been previous winners which received awards and have gone on to make more screenplays for other competitions.


How the Writer works

Having your life role as a Writer may seem easy, but in some cases it can be quite the opposite. Firstly a writer will be gin planning and brainstorming ideas which eventually leads onto the first draft of the screenplay. Throughout these stages, managing time wisely plays a huge part during working. Some writers have explained that they prefer setting a word count for the day, so for example if you were to set 2000 word count for the day you would spread out the course of writing with breaks and bring yourself to writing 2000 words before the day ends. For some people this doesn't work, they don't like the idea of having a set target to write towards, as ideas get messy and it is obvious that their ideas aren't really getting anyway. For these people they tend to break the day up with writing for so many hours, for example you may choose to write from 8:00am - 11:00am, have a break for a couple of hours and then resume your session straight after for another 3hours and so on. This way instead of having to write so many words, you can just work to set times instead and get as much done as you can.

Agents play quite a big part of this process as these are the people that help get the screenplay noticed by multiple directors and producers, these people will then hopefully want to drive the script forward and maybe put some pressure on the writer to get the script finished. These agents have numerous contacts in the industry to help do this. If an agent sees interest in a writers work they will normally get in contact with them to discuss their work and whether or not they will decide to represent them or not. the good thing about this is agents do not charge at all to represent a writer, they just get a paid a fixed percentage that is agreed upon with the client for when they're paid. This is why agents only choose to represent people they know will be successful and make lots of money.

Optioning is a process that most writer's go through where producers pay a certain amount of money to keep the rights to their script for however long. Within this time period, they will hang onto it while they option other scripts to find the one they like most. If then by the end of this time your script has not been chosen, the producers will just give you back your script and you can carry on finding someone who wants it after claiming back all the rights for it again. But if by the off chance you are successful with your script, the producers will pay full price for it and legal entitle themselves to it, meaning you have no possession over your script anymore. They are then free to adapt it, change it and do anything they want to it. The script will then go on to being filmed and distributed by further companies.

Royalties are payments that are made from the producer to the writer because of on-going use of their script. Every time the film is shown on TV or in Cinemas, the writer will receive payment each time. Also even if the script isn't made into a production, the writer will still be paid royalties to keep it confidential from any other production companies that don't have rights to it. Obviously the amount of royalties received depends on the success of the thing being sold, so having a film that is very popular will result in you being paid more money.

Role of the Writer throughout production

The producer has control over the majority of the production, this will include the script and it’s many rewrites. The writer will have to work closely with the producer to achieve something that will do exceedingly well when it comes to bringing the studio/company a profit. The writer will also have to work with the director to bring a screenplay into a visual story for an audience that will obviously have to be enjoyable to watch.

Once adjustment occurs and page lock-down, there will be no more rewrites or specific edits to the script, the script will be published and handed to the main department. If any particular scenes do need to be rewritten and/or changed, securing the pages allows this to be easily monitored, it will keep the edited and unedited pages separate which will evidently show the difference between the original script and the changes that have been made.

When finalising a screenplay, script editors are brought together into the project to help tie in both the screenwriter and producers ideas that they may have. They offer assistance to point out any problems and consequences of the current screenplay which in a rewrite, will help make it stronger when it comes to the actual production stage. Once the screenplay is completed, it becomes a shooting script which is then split by its scenes/shots and numbered, broken down to key components required for the film by the director. The directors and production assistants will then decide on an order for the scenes to be shot to make the best effective way of making use of resources, cast and locations. The shooting script also contains much more detailed description of the scenes to help everyone included in the production - this will consist of costumes, exact camera angles and so on.




Bibliography

https://www.bbc.co.uk/writersroom
https://www.writersstore.com/how-to-sell-your-script
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/commisioning_editor
https://www.bluecatscreenplay.com

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Thursday, 1 December 2016

Research Dossier

Competition Submissions

Through thorough research I have decided that I would like to enter my finished screenplay to a contest held in London. "LIFF" (London Independent Film Festival) recognises the best new screenwriters from the UK and around the world. It is held every April so I would have to enter my script towards the start of next year, however this will give me more than enough time to make all the sufficient changes to make it as good as possible. Some important requirements for this competition are;

  • Cover should include title only 
  • Have one page with contact details and 1-3 sentence synopsis
  • Fees for the contest are £25 to enter if you submit early, if not, it will be £35 after the deadline date. 

I believe this would be an amazing opportunity as winning the contest would mean a superb beneficial start in my film making career. Alongside this, I would also like to enter the completed short to a short film competition that is held every year called "ASFF" (Aesthetica Short Film Festival). This year’s festival screened 400 films as part of its Official Selection and presented a number of Showcase Screenings from leading cultural institutions. The most important requirements for this contest are;

  • The deadline for submissions is 31 May 2017
  • The maximum running time for any submitted film is 30 minutes.
  • Your entry form must include your name, address, telephone number and email so that they can contact you.

It is also qualified by BAFTA which made this contest stand out to me more than any other near my location. The prizes for winning specific competitions at the festival also result in beneficial opportunities and cash. If all goes to plan I will successfully enter my screenplay and finished short to the choices above.


Script Conventions





Short Movie Analysis

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'Joy Ride'



The short, Joy Ride, is a wonderful short film that takes a narrative that could be used for a feature film, into something only 10 minutes. The dialogue is very minimal throughout as the only parts with speech can be seen during the middle of act 2 and near act 3 when the bad guy holds the man and tells the police that he will slit his throat. Although only small parts of dialogue, it really adds nicely to the story, giving you a better understanding of the story and the characters feelings, especially at the end. The last scene we hear the policeman say something about not offering him a cigarette (as he is covered in fuel), this adds a touch humour to the story because at the very end we hear the guy burn to death in flames from the sparks from the power grid. All dialogue fits nicely and makes the short overall a lot better. The characters we are introduced to are; The guy - protagonist, the 2 men - villains, and the policemen which can be seen as the helpers but mostly just extras that are added in the story. Again, the man has the most screen time which is how we can identified him as the protagonist and the others can just blatantly be identified straight away. With this short being 10 minutes and a more in-depth storyline, I was easily able to pick out the 3 act structure and plot points. In conclusion, this film definitely conveys a lot of intensity and the narrative flows really nicely into each event that happens.

Act 1

  • He is leaving off work, gets in his car and starts to drive; home maybe. 
Plot Point 1
  • He spots a body in the middle of the road and brakes suddenly to get out and see if the man is okay. The man on the roads is perfectly fine and it turns out to be an ambush, he is then knocked unconscious with a hammer. 

Act 2
  •  He wakes up in the boot of a car. 2 to villains are stopped by the police because of a faulty brake lot and are forced to kill the cops to not blow their cover. the guy then powers off the cars brakes by dismantling the electrics, kicking them with his feet. 
Plot Point 2
  •  The 2 men crash the car and holds the guy hostage by the neck with a knife to his throat. The guy knocks out the one holding him and walks slowly towards the police.
Act 3
  •  The police take care of him and he realises he is back where he left off. Sparks fly off the power grid and engulfs the man in flames. 



(2)

'Jet'



Jet is a wonderful short that is really powerful in terms of what is tells the audience, although there is no dialogue what so ever, the narrative is executed very well and easy to understand exactly what is happening. We are introduced to one man at the start who is attempting to commit suicide by putting a gun to his head. After putting the gun down he witnesses a young girl being dragged into a van just down the road, he then puts himself at risk by following the van to save the little girl. this short consists of only four characters in total - The man, 2 criminals and the girl. It is easy to recognise the man as the protagonist, the is the guy that drives the story forward and where the main focus of the audience remains. The little girl that is captured and our protagonist has to rescue would be identified as the damsel, in relation to Vladimir Propp's character theory. As for the bad guys, they would just be classed as the villains. Due to it only being 7 minutes long it is quite hard to split it up into 3 acts as some things happen so quickly, however when you properly look at it you can identify where the writer has chosen to put the  acts in place to make the narrative flow like a proper movie.

Act 1

  • He attempts to kill himself
Plot Point 1
  • Witnesses girl being kidnapped and pulled into van

Act 2
  • He follows the van and approaches the building were the girl is held hostage. 
Plot Point 2
  • He kills the 2 criminals 
Act 3
  • He finds the girl in a room in the house, the screen cuts to black. 



Theme, Location, Character, Narrative. 


Due to my script being fairly intense and atmospheric, it includes many different themes that relate to the character and plot of the story. The protagonist has to endure a twisted journey that tears his life apart, along the way he faces decisions that have regrettable outcomes, inducing more and more suffering and a life of hell. The most important themes I decided to focus on are;

  • Adventure
  • Escape
  • Transformation
I wanted to add a supernatural twist onto a standard action film by using a mutation as the focal point of the movie. Using something fictional allows my imagination to flow better as I could do whatever I wanted, using this mutation as the evil presence within the film. 

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There was an incident back in 1975 with Travis Walton, an american logger who claimed he had been abducted in the middle of the forest. To cut the story short he also claimed that he woke up in a weird hospital with three sort bald creatures observing him. I tried relating my script to this incident as it really got me interested and wanted to make my own take on what was believed to have happened that night, but instead with my own scenario and characters.


(4)
I had a huge inspiration from Star Wars to have my forest scene similar to Endor forest, with the tall trees and beautiful landscapes. Del Norte county California is exactly where the parts of Endor was shot. the ambiance would be truly amazing and would be perfect for what shots I would want to be filmed there. Adding CGI for a building would also be simple enough to do.

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The next most important location in my script is the "Hospital", or Asylum as some people like to refer to it as. There is a game I really like to play called "Outlast" and it is based around a news reporter that is sent to document an abandoned hospital that is found to be occupied by weird mutated creatures. I'd like to think the design of the hospital would be similar to my film, but psychopathic doctors and nurses instead of other mutants.


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In my story, Darrel forms the supernatural mutation that gives him super strength and makes his veins pop out of his skin. When writing the story I liked to visualise him as this guy. His name is Chris Walker and was an ex-military policeman, very strong, ugly and huge. much like Darrel, when he is mutated. When he isn't, I like to think of him as this person. Andrew Garfield acted in The Amazing Spiderman and The Social Network, also may other films. I could picture him as the traveller I want to have in my story. Due to him being a skinny male, it would be a really intense  transformation so see him turn into something like Chris Walker.

The Robert Taylor incident is another story I have read online about a U.F.O sighting, seen above a forest in Livingston. The man claimed it was a dark metallic colour and he smelt a foul odour like "burning brakes" as the object got closer to him. He later fell unconscious and work up and it had disappeared. His truck wouldn't start and he had to walk back to his house. (8)

These weird/unusual stories are a huge inspiration to my film. Having these unknown elements is what I believe makes my story interesting.

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Although the movie U.F.O which was re-titled to Alien Uprising in 2013 didn't succeed as well as people wanted it to, I really liked the idea the movie was based upon. The classic aliens taking over the world scenario. Although my film is not at all like this, I took some inspiration from this to make my movie idea expand into a better one. Context of aliens and mutants - Darrel transforms, Aliens holding people captive - Darrel is held prisoner, and so on. This movie and chronicle which is a POV Scifi thriller, also inspired me. Teenagers acquiring superpowers and one turning evil and losing complete control. I also aim to have POV shots in my film similar to Chronicle, when Darrel is in the hospital and transforming into his mutant self. Back in High School me and my friends were big fans of these types of movies and decided to enter a short film competition with a film named "5IFTH". Based upon some of these titles, there would be 5 teenagers that consume something they shouldn't and each gain different supernatural powers. 1 out of the 5 people would turn evil, leaving the other 4 to fight against him. This idea never went ahead to production but I did manage to create an intro for the film:

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When reading the brief for this unit I decided I would use my old idea and adapt it so I could easily meet the grading criteria - writing a 10 minute short for "5IFTH" would have never worked as it was originally meant to last 30 minutes. This is how I am now left with the film "Mutant". The narrative flows much nicer and will fit concisely within the 10 minutes I have for this unit.



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Filmman Cine Mix (2014) ‘Joyride’, Jim Gillespie, 1995. Available at: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3LZouIUcOSo&t=189s (Accessed: 6 December 2016).


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FILMSshort (2016) Jet | award-winning thriller short film | Jordan Chesney. Available at: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VGwiOXnfnCw&t=285s (Accessed: 6 December 2016).


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Pedia, W. (2017) ‘Robert Taylor incident’, in Wikipedia. Available at: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Robert_Taylor_incident (Accessed: 8 December 2016).


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IMDB (2012) IMDB. Available at: http://www.imdb.com/title/tt2040578/ (Accessed: 8 December 2016).


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Root, C. (2016) Chronicle. Available at: http://cinemaroot.com/watch-chronicle-full-movie/ (Accessed: 8 December 2016).



(11) - Self Reference

Liam Culham (2016) 5ifth Intro. Available at: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PCfWN2DCmWg (Accessed: 8 December 2016).